Late in the day, I went to the swimming pool with my brother and my friends. My bro
ther started to tell embarrassing stories about me to my friends. I was fed up with my brother at that moment, because my friends didn’t stop laughing at me.In the hotel I told the story to my mommy. She didn’t do anything about this. So, I talked to my daddy, he didn’t do anything about it. I got fed up with my brother and I hit him, my daddy and my mommy told me off. After this, my parents were angry.
Conclusion: In this holiday, I found out that my brother is a problem in my life
Ana Carolina Vidal 8ªE
4 comentários:
Good Text, I don't think it was very embarassing
it's very funny and very well writeen, but I know you can do better
sayon
not so embarrassing,
Felipe Andrade
It could had been worse, but I don't think it was nice what he did to you, talking embarrassing facts of your life.
But be cool, it's already past!
Flávia S.
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